Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: mục đích sử dụng, kỷ niệm liên quan) và kết thúc bằng một câu kết luận ngắn. Sử dụng thì đúng (past tense cho quá khứ) và câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me so I could ride to school every day, and I remember enjoying weekend rides with my friends. Unfortunately, I eventually lost it, but I still like cycling and I plan to buy another bike for leisure travel in the future.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng với lý do cụ thể và dẫn chứng ngắn. Tránh tiếng lấp lửng (uh) và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g. "No, I don't" -> "No, I don't think so"; "it costs" not "it's cost"). Giữ câu mạch lạc với liên từ hợp lý (because, so, therefore).

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Because distances between places are large and infrastructure for cycling is limited, commuting by bike can be impractical and unsafe. Therefore most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel.

× Yes I did. Well when I was a child my mom gave me a bike for transportation.

✓ Yes, I did. Well, when I was a child my mom gave me a bike for transportation.

The original sentence needs commas for natural pauses but the grammar is correct; maintain past tense 'gave' for an action completed in the past. Suggest adding commas after 'Yes' and 'Well' to improve fluency and clarity.

× I usually use this for go to school for going to school and I lost it but I really like it so I think in the future I will buy a bike for traveling.

✓ I usually used it to go to school, but I lost it. I really liked it, so I think in the future I will buy a bike for traveling.

The student mixes present and past tenses and misuses verb forms. The action of using the bike happened in the past, so use past tense 'used' and the infinitive 'to go' after 'used'. 'For going to school' is incorrect here. Also separate into sentences for clarity and keep consistent past references ('lost', 'liked'). 'Will buy' is fine for future intent.

× No, I don't because, uh, in our country, uh, everything is far from each other.

✓ No, I don't, because in our country places are far from each other.

'I don't' is incomplete; needs object (I don't think so) or rephrase. 'Everything is far from each other' is unnatural because 'everything' is not used with 'each other'. Use 'places are far from each other' to refer to locations.

× So to be travel by bike, it's cost many problem as well as, uh, effort to go to the destination.

✓ So travelling by bike costs many problems and requires a lot of effort to get to destinations.

'To be travel' is ungrammatical; use gerund 'travelling' or 'to travel'. 'It's cost' should be 'costs' (subject-verb) and 'many problem' should be 'many problems'. Also use 'requires a lot of effort' instead of 'as well as effort' for clarity.

× So people usually don't use.

✓ So people usually don't use bikes.

The verb 'use' is transitive here and requires an object; add 'bikes' to complete the sentence and convey the intended meaning.