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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I'm a child

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I always see a lot of people ride the bikes in the street

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法有错误,时态和主谓一致需要改正;回答也太简短,缺少细节和连贯衔接。建议用过去时开始并补充一两句具体信息(如什么时候、什么样的自行车、是否常骑、与谁一起骑等),总句数不超过5句。可以用连接词如“because / and / when”来使回答更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day after school. I learned to ride it in the park with my older brother, which helped me gain confidence quickly.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 语法和表达需更自然,时态与细节可以增强回答的说服力。建议先给出直接观点,然后用具体观察或原因支撑,例如在哪些城市或场合看到很多人骑车,或说明原因(如方便、环保、交通拥堵)。使用连接词如“because / for example / especially”来保证逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, I often see many people riding bicycles in the city center and near universities, especially during rush hour, because cycling is cheap and convenient for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I'm a child

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题类型:现在时使用不当。原句使用了现在时(have, I'm),但问句是关于过去(when you were a child)。应把动词改为过去式以保持时态一致性。建议:把 have 改为过去式 had,把 am 改为 was。句子应为 “I had a bike when I was a child.”

Present tense issue

× Yes I always see a lot of people ride the bikes in the street

Yes, I always see a lot of people riding bikes in the street.

问题类型:现在时及动名词形式使用不当。原句中 see 后面直接接不带-ing 的 ride,英语中常用结构是 see + 人 + (doing) 表示看到某人正在做某事,或 see + sth 表示看到某物;此外 the bikes 在泛指时不需要定冠词。建议:将 ride 改为 riding,把 "the bikes" 改为泛指形式 "bikes",并在句首加入逗号或连词。正确句子为 “I always see a lot of people riding bikes in the street.”

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