Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike where you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my eye face there are many people ride riding bikes after work
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题,而且使用了错误的句式。建议:直接回答问题,用一个主题句说明是否有自行车,然后补充一到两句具体细节(例如什么时候得到的、经常骑去哪里、和谁一起骑)。注意语法和句型的正确性,避免把考官的问题重复成疑问句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. It was a simple red bicycle with a small basket.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但有语法错误和用词不当,且缺乏连贯的细节。建议:用一到两句直接陈述观点,然后用连接词(例如 because, for example, so)提供具体原因或例子,注意主谓一致和动词形式。尽量把回答控制在最多五句话内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see people riding bikes in parks and on dedicated bike lanes after work.
× Did you have a bike where you were a child?
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
原句使用了错误的介词“where”。此处想询问“在你小时候”(表示时间),正确的介词应为“when”。建议记住:表示时间用 when,表示地点用 where。
× Yes, in my eye face there are many people ride riding bikes after work
✓ Yes, in my view there are many people who ride bikes after work.
句中多个问题: 1) “in my eye face” 是错误短语,意图为“在我看来/我认为”,应使用短语“in my view”或“in my opinion”。 2) 缺少关系代词“who”连接主句和定语从句,正确为“people who ride bikes”。 3) 动词形式错误:不应同时用原形和 -ing(“ride riding”),在此句中描述习惯性动作用一般现在时“ride”。 综合以上,修改为“in my view there are many people who ride bikes after work.” 建议:学习常用表达“in my opinion/view”,使用关系代词连接人和后续动词,并根据习惯或常态使用一般现在时。