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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike with my sister. We used to ride it inside.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think that bikes are well known in my country, but motorcycles are like the most popular than bikes.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, adding a brief specific detail, and using a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, mention where you rode, how often, or a short memory to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike that I shared with my sister. We often rode it around the courtyard near our house, especially in the afternoons after school. Because the street was narrow and busy, we usually practiced inside the yard until we felt confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid informal phrases like "like the most"; use precise vocabulary and a concise structure. Mention examples (e.g., traffic patterns, culture, or weather) to justify your opinion.

Ví dụ: Not really; I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and cope better with long distances and heavy traffic. Additionally, the hot climate and lack of safe bike lanes make cycling less common.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, I had a bike with my sister. We used to ride it inside.

Yes, I had a bike that I shared with my sister. We used to ride it indoors.

The original sentence 'I had a bike with my sister' is unclear and awkward in English; it's better to say 'I had a bike that I shared with my sister' to show the relationship. 'Inside' is grammatically acceptable but native speakers prefer the adverb 'indoors' for riding inside a building. The suggested changes improve clarity and use the correct adverb form.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× No, I don't think that bikes are well known in my country, but motorcycles are like the most popular than bikes.

No, I don't think bikes are well known in my country; motorcycles are much more popular than bikes.

Several issues: 'are well known' is acceptable but 'well known' is adjective phrase; keep it but remove that is for conciseness. 'are like the most popular than bikes' is ungrammatical: 'like' is filler and should be removed; 'the most popular than' mixes superlative with 'than' which is wrong. Use 'much more popular than' to compare two items. The correction fixes comparison form and removes colloquial filler for grammatical accuracy.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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