Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I actually don't have any type of.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think mainly in our country, backs are the main measure of doing work.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Be direct, use correct tense and natural phrasing, and give a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (use past tense), then add one or two specific reasons or a short memory. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my neighborhood was small and my parents preferred I stay close to home. As a result, I learned to enjoy walking and exploring the area on foot.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Use accurate vocabulary and clear structure: give a topic sentence answering the question, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Correct word choice (bikes, not backs) and concrete examples (commuting, delivery workers, recreation) will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances and delivery workers often use them because they are cheap and convenient. Therefore, bikes are an important part of daily life for lots of people.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I actually don't have any type of.

✓ No, I actually didn't have any type of bike.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so the student's reply must use past tense. The original uses present tense 'don't have' which is inconsistent. Also the sentence is incomplete and missing the noun 'bike'. Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the question and include the noun. Suggestion: say 'No, I actually didn't have any type of bike' or more naturally 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think mainly in our country, backs are the main measure of doing work.

✓ Yes, I think in our country, bikes are the main means of doing work.

The original has 'backs' which is a misspelling of 'bikes' and uses 'measure' which is incorrect noun choice for this context. 'Bikes' should be plural, which is correct for general statement. 'Means' is the proper noun to indicate a method; 'measure' is wrong. Also word order 'mainly in our country' is awkward; place 'in our country' earlier. Suggestion: 'Yes, I think in our country, bikes are the main means of doing work.'

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