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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes of course I have the E bike when I was a child but because I was lazy I just ride it once or twice a week so the battery is broken because I don't I always forget to charge it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. I live in Shanghai, China. Shanghai is the city center of the country. In Shanghai, people always choose the bike service because of the limited of air pollution.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答要用时态一致,句子更简洁,遵循“主题句+具体细节”结构,并用连词使表达更连贯。避免重复信息并提供具体细节(例如骑行频率、使用场景、什么时候电池坏)。可以把原因和结果分成两句,用正确的过去时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had an electric bike when I was a child. I only rode it once or twice a week because I was quite lazy, so I often forgot to charge the battery and it eventually stopped working.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并注意用词准确。先给直接回答,然后用1–2句具体原因或例子支持。避免不准确或尴尬的短语(例如“limited of air pollution”应为“to reduce air pollution”或“because of traffic and pollution concerns”)。使用连接词(for example, because, so)使逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China, especially in big cities like Shanghai. Many people use shared bikes or e-bikes to avoid traffic jams and to help reduce air pollution, for example commuting short distances to work or school.

Ngữ pháp

5

× Yes of course I have the E bike when I was a child but because I was lazy I just ride it once or twice a week so the battery is broken because I don't I always forget to charge it.

Yes, of course. I had the e-bike when I was a child, but because I was lazy I only rode it once or twice a week, so the battery broke because I always forgot to charge it.

语法问题类型ID: 5(过去时态问题)和 2(第三人称单数/动词时态一致问题)以及 6(现在时态误用)。 解释(简体中文): 1) 句子描述的是“小时候”的事情,应该使用过去时态,因此动词要用过去式:have → had;ride → rode;forget → forgot;is broken/battery is broken → broke(或 'became broken')。原句混用了现在时和过去时,时态不一致。 2) 'I don't I always forget' 是冗余且语序错误,应改为 'I always forgot'(过去时)。 3) 建议:叙述过去经历时,全句保持过去时;使用逗号和连词分隔短句以清晰表达,去掉多余的词。

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× Yes, of course. I live in Shanghai, China. Shanghai is the city center of the country. In Shanghai, people always choose the bike service because of the limited of air pollution.

Yes, of course. I live in Shanghai, China. Shanghai is the country's center, and in Shanghai people often choose bike-sharing services because of serious air pollution.

语法问题类型ID: 11(介词或词组使用错误)、13(形容词/副词使用错误)和 26(句子结构/表达不自然)。 解释(简体中文): 1) 'the city center of the country' 表达不自然,改为 'the country's center' 或更自然地说 'one of the country's major cities'。原句意思模糊。 2) 'choose the bike service' 不太地道,应为 'choose bike-sharing services' 或 'use bike-sharing services'。 3) 'because of the limited of air pollution' 是不正确的短语。应表达为 'because of serious/poor air quality' 或 'because of severe air pollution'。'limited' 用法错误。 4) 建议:使用更自然的搭配(bike-sharing/bike service),修正介词短语并用合适的形容词描述污染程度。

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