Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did, I have a yellow bag when I was a child since it was 2013. I ride my bike every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bike is quite popular in my country, China.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 句子有时态、词汇和逻辑问题。回答应先直接回应问题(主题句),然后用1–2句具体细节支持。注意时态一致(过去时),纠正单词错误(bag → bike),并避免冗长不相关信息。可用连接词如“when”或“so”使表达连贯。尽量把答案控制在不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a yellow bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day. I remember learning to ride it in 2013, and it became my favorite way to get around the neighborhood. Because of that, I became quite confident cycling on busy streets.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短。要先给出明确主题句,然后用1–2句具体理由或例子支持,使用复数和适当的搭配(bikes are)。可加入比较或原因来丰富内容,保持时态和语法正确,句子总数不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. Many people use bikes or e-bikes for short commutes because they are affordable and convenient. For example, in my city you can see bike-sharing services everywhere, which makes cycling a practical choice for daily travel.
× Yes I did, I have a yellow bag when I was a child since it was 2013. I ride my bike every day.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a yellow bike when I was a child; it was from 2013. I rode my bike every day.
问题类型ID: 6(现在时问题)和 5(过去时问题)。原句中时态混用且时态不符合时间状语。学生回答是关于过去的经历,应该使用过去时:"I have a yellow bag when I was a child" 中的 have 应为过去时 had;“I ride my bike every day.” 在谈过去习惯时应改为过去时 rode。句子中提到“since it was 2013” 表达也不自然,若要说明年份应写成“it was from 2013” 或者更清楚地说明“I had it since 2013”但这样又与“when I was a child”重复。建议:将整个回答统一为过去时,段落中同一时间框架内使用一致时态,使用恰当的词(bike 而非 bag 如果原意为自行车)。注意标点,将句子拆分为更清晰的短句。
× Yes, bike is quite popular in my country, China.
✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, China.
问题类型ID: 1(单复数问题)。原句中名词 bike 前缺少冠词或复数形式。这里谈的是普遍现象,应使用复数形式 bikes 或加定冠词和单数可数名词(the bike)但更自然的是复数。谓语也应与复数主语一致,使用 are。建议:当谈论某种事物普遍存在时,用复数(bikes are)或不可数名词形式(如 traffic)并保证主谓一致。