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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, and I have the bike when I was a child and my dad will practice this with me. Also he teach me how to not fall on the floor. So I like to ride a ride a bike until now and I will ride this usually.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think yes because it is a good way for us to transport to the other place and also Taiwan has many streets and they are too small so it is

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 答案要更自然、時態一致並避免重複。建議:1) 使用正確時態(過去經歷用過去式);2) 開頭給出直接的主題句,然後用1-2句具體細節支持;3) 避免單字重複,使用連接詞如“and”、“so”、“because”使句子更連貫;4) 總句數不要超過5句。示例修改點:將“have”改為“had”,“will practice/teach”改為“practiced/taught”,刪除多餘的“ride a”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father practiced riding with me and taught me how to balance so I wouldn’t fall. I still enjoy cycling now and usually ride it for exercise or short trips.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 答案需更完整並提供具體例子與連接詞使邏輯更清晰。建議:1) 開門見山給出肯定或否定的回答;2) 使用清晰理由並舉具體例子(如城市、通勤、環保);3) 避免句子未完成,結尾要完整;4) 使用多樣詞彙代替重複的“place/too”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Taiwan. They are convenient for short trips and commuting because many streets are narrow and traffic can be heavy. In cities like Taipei, you can also find public bike-sharing schemes which makes cycling even more common.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yeah, and I have the bike when I was a child and my dad will practice this with me.

Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child and my dad practiced with me.

此句时态混用:原句用现在时 'have' 与过去时间状语 'when I was a child' 不一致,且 'will practice' 表示将来但实际应为过去发生的动作。应将相关动词改为一般过去时(had, practiced)。建议在描述过去经历时统一使用过去时。

Past tense issue

× Also he teach me how to not fall on the floor.

Also, he taught me how not to fall on the ground.

动词时态错误:句中描述过去发生的教导,动词应为过去式 'taught' 而不是现在式 'teach'。此外,固定搭配为 'how not to fall',把否定词置于不定式前;'on the floor' 更自然用 'on the ground' 或直接 'fall'。建议将动词改为过去式并调整不定式结构。

Present tense issue

× So I like to ride a ride a bike until now and I will ride this usually.

So I have liked riding a bike until now, and I usually ride one.

时态与表达不自然:'like to ride a ride a bike until now' 用词重复且时态不清。若要表达从过去到现在一直喜欢,应使用现在完成时 'have liked' 或 'have enjoyed riding';'I will ride this usually' 错用将来时,实际习惯应用一般现在时 'usually ride'。建议避免重复词并使用现在完成时与一般现在时描述持续喜好和习惯。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think yes because it is a good way for us to transport to the other place and also Taiwan has many streets and they are too small so it is

I think so, because it is a good way for us to travel to other places. Also, Taiwan has many narrow streets, so bicycles are convenient.

代词与表达问题:'I think yes' 更自然为 'I think so';'transport to the other place' 用词不当,通常说 'travel to other places' 或 'get to other places';句末不完整,需明确主语(bicycles)和谓语(are convenient)。另外 'they are too small' 指代不清,改为 'many narrow streets' 更清晰。建议使用正确代词短语、动词搭配并补全句子。

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