Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by making the structure more natural and avoiding slight redundancy. Start with a direct topic sentence about childhood, then briefly contrast with the present, and add one specific detail (how far your commute is or a benefit you experience). Use a linking phrase like “however” to connect past and present.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I own one now and I use it to commute to my office most days because it’s faster and much cheaper than taking public transport. For example, riding saves me about 20 minutes each way and also helps me stay fit.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains errors and unclear words (e.g., “Oil yes”, “public transport foot”) and repetitive reasons. Improve by giving a clear direct answer first, correct the mistaken words, use one linking word, and include a specific example or comparison to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and often faster than cars in congested areas. For instance, many people in my city cycle to work to avoid traffic jams, and cycling also reduces commuting costs compared with using taxis or buses.

× I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I own one now.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I have one now.

The sentence mixes past and present correctly, but the verb 'own' sounds awkward in spoken context; 'have' is the more natural present-tense stative verb for possession. Use present simple 'have' to indicate current possession. Suggestion: replace 'own' with 'have' to make the sentence sound natural and grammatically correct in context.

× Oil yes, I think bikes are most popular in our country because it is convenient as well as it is faster and cheaper than public transport foot.

✓ Oh yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because they are convenient, faster, and cheaper than public transport.

Multiple problems: 'Oil' is a typo for the interjection 'Oh' (sentence structure/word choice). 'Bikes are most popular' is awkward; use 'very popular' (adjective usage). 'It is convenient' and 'it is faster and cheaper' use singular pronoun for plural noun 'bikes'—this is a subject-pronoun agreement error (use 'they are'). 'Public transport foot' is incorrect word choice/order; likely meant 'public transport' or 'by public transport'. The corrected sentence: replace 'Oil' with 'Oh', change 'most popular' to 'very popular', use plural pronoun 'they are', and remove 'foot' or replace with 'public transport'. Suggestions: proofread for typos, ensure pronouns agree with their nouns, and simplify comparative structure to 'faster and cheaper than public transport'.