Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, sentence structure and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid extra or vague phrases like "on my face" and keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, use past simple consistently, describe where you rode it and one specific memory or reason you liked it.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a red bicycle when I was a child. It was my favorite because I used it to ride to the market every weekend, which made errands fun and saved time. Also, I remember racing my friends in the park, and those memories always make me smile.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and organize it: start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons linked by connectors. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "convenient," "traffic congestion") and correct grammar (modal verbs and conditionals). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "there things."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Firstly, they are convenient and cheap for short trips and running errands. Secondly, they help riders avoid heavy traffic, so people often choose bikes when roads are congested.

× When I was child, I have a bike and I like that bike mostly, which is red in color.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike and I liked that bike the most; it was red.

Errors: missing article before 'child' and tense mismatch. 'When I was a child' requires the article a. The time frame is past, so verbs should be past: 'have' -> 'had', 'like' -> 'liked'. 'Mostly' is unnatural here; use 'the most'. Also avoid redundant 'in color' by saying 'it was red'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events and include necessary articles. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It is very helpful when going to the markets and it will bring a lot of happiness on my face.

✓ It was very helpful for going to the market and it made me very happy.

Errors: tense inconsistency and awkward preposition. The context refers to past experience, so use past tense 'was' and 'made'. Use 'for going to the market' (singular and natural phrasing) and 'made me very happy' is idiomatic rather than 'bring a lot of happiness on my face'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout and choose natural collocations ('made me happy'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes are there things where you can go by with the help of the bike any anywhere.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are a means of transport that let you go places easily.

Errors: incorrect pronoun use ('there' instead of 'they'), awkward noun phrase 'things where you can go by' and redundant 'with the help of the bike any anywhere'. Correction uses 'they' for 'bikes', 'a means of transport' as a clearer noun phrase, and 'let you go places easily' for natural expression. Suggestion: use appropriate pronouns and clearer, concise phrases for function and purpose. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Like when you have a car you have a lot of traffic and after in the traffic if your car is jammed no one can go there really if you have a bike then you can go easily anywhere.

✓ For example, when you have a car you can get stuck in heavy traffic; if your car is jammed, nobody can move, but with a bike you can get through and go places easily.

Errors: awkward ordering, run-on sentence, incorrect word choice ('after in the traffic'), and informal 'no one can go there really'. Correction splits into clearer clauses, uses 'get stuck in heavy traffic' and 'nobody can move', and contrasts with 'with a bike you can get through'. Suggestion: break long ideas into shorter clauses, use standard phrases for traffic situations, and maintain cohesion with linking words. Grammar problem type ID:26