Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep answers concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "have a bike" repeated) and tense/grammar errors (use past tense consistently). Also vary vocabulary (use words like "walked" instead of "go to school by walking") and limit answer to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents thought I was too young, so they didn't allow me to ride one. Instead, I usually walked to school or my parents drove me there.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise opinion first, then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct factual inaccuracies and word choice (bikes do not require power; motorbikes have engines). Avoid long, run-on sentences and finish your thought. Use vocabulary like "motorbikes are more convenient" and phrases such as "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: I don't think pedal bikes are very popular in my country; motorbikes are much more common. This is because motorbikes are faster and more convenient for commuting, and many people prefer them for hilly routes or longer distances.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was too young to have a bike at that time so they didn't allow me to have a bike so I usually go to school by walking or either my parents dropped me to the school.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was too young to have one, so they didn't allow me to have a bike. I usually walked to school or my parents drove me to school.

The original sentence mixes past and present verbs inconsistently. The situation is in the past, so actions should use past tense: 'go to school by walking' should be 'walked to school' and 'dropped me to the school' is unnatural and should be 'drove me to school.' Also use 'one' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: keep all verbs describing past events in simple past and use natural verbs and pronouns for brevity. Grammar problem type ID: 5.

× I usually go to school by walking or either my parents dropped me to the school.

✓ I usually walked to school or my parents drove me to school.

The preposition 'to' after 'dropped me' is not appropriate; native speakers say 'dropped me off at school' or better 'drove me to school.' Also 'by walking' is wordy; 'walked' is the correct verb form. Maintain past tense consistency. Suggestion: use 'walked' for walking and 'drove me to school' or 'dropped me off at school' for being taken by car. Grammar problem type ID: 11.

× I don't think bikes are much popular in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.

The phrase 'much popular' is incorrect; 'popular' is modified by 'very' or 'quite.' Use 'very popular' to express low popularity: 'I don't think bikes are very popular.' Suggestion: use appropriate adverb modifiers with adjectives (very, quite, fairly) rather than 'much' before adjectives. Grammar problem type ID: 14.

× I think instead bikes, motorbikes are quite popular in my country because bikes require power to run so because they don't have an engine and while the motorbikes have an engineered you just need to press the button to start them and then you can go wherever you want to go and then another thing is if you

✓ I think motorbikes are more popular than bicycles in my country because bicycles do not have engines and require pedaling, whereas motorbikes have engines and you can start them easily and go wherever you want.

The original sentence is long, repetitive and ungrammatical. 'Instead bikes, motorbikes' is incorrect order; use 'motorbikes are more popular than bicycles.' 'Bikes require power to run so because they don't have an engine' is contradictory and unclear. Use clear cause: 'bicycles do not have engines and require pedaling.' 'Engineered' is incorrect word; use 'engines.' Also remove repeated conjunctions ('and then'). Break into concise clauses to improve clarity. Suggestion: simplify sentences, compare clearly ('more popular than'), and use correct nouns ('engine') and verbs ('require pedaling' or 'need no engine'). Grammar problem type ID: 26.

× while the motorbikes have an engineered you just need to press the button to start them

✓ while motorbikes have engines; you just need to press a button to start them.

The word 'engineered' is an adjective or past participle meaning 'designed,' not the noun 'engine.' Also 'press the button' should be 'press a button' unless referring to a specific one. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'engine' and the article 'a' when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID: 13}]}</ReportGrammarArguments> PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0} PMID: 0.0}