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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Actually, I never owned a bike when I was a kid. Umm, I was never really athletic. Umm, I learned how to ride a bike when I was about 11 or 12 years old.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course it is. I think it's a pretty common vehicle for people to commute. It's affordable and you can just scan a QR code on the road to rent a bike just for a little while, and it's even pretty convenient to ride a bike on the road during the traffic jam.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且直接,但存在填充词(“Umm”)较多,句子略显松散。建议减少无意义的犹豫词,保持句子简洁;第一句直接回答(Yes/No)后用一两句具体细节支撑(例如为什么没有,以及学骑车的情境或感受)。此外可使用连接词使信息更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I never owned a bike as a child. I wasn't very athletic, so my parents didn't buy one for me. I only learned to ride when I was about eleven or twelve, and I remember practicing on weekends in my neighborhood park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且相关,使用了合适的细节(共享单车、可扫码租借、在拥堵时便捷)。但句子衔接可更流畅,注意主谓一致(bikes are ... rather than it is),避免重复词汇如“pretty”。建议用一两个连接词扩展原因并给出一个小例子或比较。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are affordable and widely used for short commutes; for example, many people use QR-code rental bikes to get around the city. Moreover, they are often faster than cars during rush hour because you can weave through traffic and avoid long delays.

Ngữ pháp

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× Yes, of course it is.

Yes, of course they are.

原句主语是复数名词“bikes”,因此谓语动词和代词也必须用复数形式。原句用单数代词“it”与复数主语不一致,构成主谓一致错误。建议把代词改为“they”并把系动词保持复数(are)。

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× I think it's a pretty common vehicle for people to commute.

I think they're a pretty common way for people to commute.

原句中将复数名词“bikes”概念替换为单数“vehicle”导致数不一致或表意不自然。更自然的表达是用复数代词“they”对应“bikes”,并用“way”或“method”来表示“通勤方式”。另外“vehicle”虽可用,但要与复数主语一致,改为“they're a pretty common vehicle”也可,但更常见的搭配是“a common way”。建议根据上下文使用与复数主语一致的词语或代词。

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× you can just scan a QR code on the road to rent a bike just for a little while, and it's even pretty convenient to ride a bike on the road during the traffic jam.

you can just scan a QR code on the street to rent a bike for a short time, and it's even quite convenient to ride a bike in traffic jams.

原句存在多处表达不够地道或结构冗余的问题:1) “on the road”在这里不如“on the street”或直接省略更自然;2) “just for a little while”冗长且口语化,改为“for a short time”更正式且简洁;3) “during the traffic jam”用法不自然,常用复数“traffic jams”或短语“in traffic”来表示拥堵时段;4) 两次使用“just”显得重复,精简后更通顺。建议使用更标准的介词短语和简洁表达。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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