Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Of course. Actually I don't like the bike because when I was small I used a bike to get to any other place. It makes me hurt a lot.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course, many people in China liked to use cycling to get anywhere all over China and I know who use the bike to anyway of the world.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然且直接回应问题,结构上先给出简短明确的主题句,然后用一到两句具体细节支持。避免时态和语法错误,注意主谓一致和代词使用。可以改为过去时描述童年经历,并解释为什么会不喜欢,比如因为摔伤或骑行环境危险。连接词(because, so, when)要正确使用以提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I used to ride to school and visit friends. However, I didn’t like it much because I fell off several times and hurt myself, so I often walked instead.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更准确的时态和更清晰的表达。先给出直接观点(Yes/No),然后用一到两条具体理由支持,比如城市通勤、共享单车普及或环境保护等。避免模糊或不连贯的句子,使用连接词(for example, because, therefore)来组织信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips in cities because they are convenient and cheap, and cycling is also promoted as an environmentally friendly way to travel.
× Of course. Actually I don't like the bike because when I was small I used a bike to get to any other place. It makes me hurt a lot.
✓ Of course. Actually I didn't like the bike because when I was small I used a bike to get to other places. It hurt me a lot.
语法问题类型ID:6(现在时问题)。说明:原句中说过去的习惯或经历,应使用过去时。句子中有混合时态:开头用现在时“I don't like”,但后半句描述童年应使用过去时“didn't like”。另外“to get to any other place”不自然,应改为“to get to other places”。最后一句“It makes me hurt a lot.”时态与表达不当,描述过往伤害应为过去时并用主动结构“It hurt me a lot.” 建议:叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时;用“other places”表示“其他地方”;表示受伤或感到疼痛用“hurt”作过去式,主语为“It”或具体部位,加上“me”。
× Of course, many people in China liked to use cycling to get anywhere all over China and I know who use the bike to anyway of the world.
✓ Of course, many people in China like to cycle to get around, and I know people who use bikes to travel around the world.
语法问题类型ID:8(动词 + -ing 形式)和11(介词使用错误)。说明:原句中“liked to use cycling”有语法与搭配问题,正确表达为“like to cycle”或“like cycling”。“to get anywhere all over China”冗余且不自然,应为“to get around”或“to get anywhere in China”。“I know who use the bike to anyway of the world.”结构混乱,缺少宾语并且介词短语错误,应改为“I know people who use bikes to travel around the world.” 建议:用“like to cycle”或“like cycling”;用“get around”表示“到处去”;用“people who”引导定语从句,并用“travel around the world”表示“环游世界”。