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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bad bike when I was a child my mother by bought a pink bike bike for my birthday gift and I learned it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In China many people use bike to As a transportation to go to work it is very cheap and

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法和时态需要纠正,表达要简洁自然并按顺序叙述事件。可以先直接回答问题,接着用一到两句补充细节(谁买、颜色、用途、学会骑的经历)。注意动词时态(过去式)和避免重复词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a pink bike as a birthday present when I was a child, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体明确,但需改进连贯性和句子完整性。先给出总体观点,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,使用连词(because, so, therefore)使逻辑清楚,注意语法(use bikes, as transportation, cheap)。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because they are an affordable and convenient way to get to work. Many people use bicycles for short commutes, and in some cities bike-sharing schemes make them even more accessible.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I have a bad bike when I was a child my mother by bought a pink bike bike for my birthday gift and I learned it.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought me a pink bike for my birthday, and I learned to ride it.

问题属于句子结构错误(ID 26)并伴有动词时态和重复词语问题。原句中时态混用(“have” 用于一般现在,但句子背景是过去),且缺少必要的标点导致多个子句连在一起;“by bought” 是错误词序,正确应为 “bought me” 表示“买给我”;“bike bike” 重复。建议:1)把整个陈述按时间分成短句,使用过去时(had, bought, learned);2)注意英语中“buy somebody something” 的结构或使用“buy ... for someone”;3)学习基本标点,用句号或逗号分开并连接适当的连词;4)不要重复单词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× In China many people use bike to As a transportation to go to work it is very cheap and

In China many people use bikes as a means of transportation to go to work because it is very cheap.

问题属于介词/固定搭配使用错误(ID 11)和句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句中“use bike to As a transportation” 语序混乱且单复数错误,应为“use bikes as a means of transportation”;此外句子缺少连词和标点,导致不完整。建议:1)使用常见表达“use something as a means of transportation” 或“use bikes to go to work”;2)注意名词单复数(bike → bikes 当泛指多数人使用时);3)用连词连接原因从句,例如“because”;4)句子末尾补全,确保完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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