Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course many people in our country is like for example, the classes easily represent the school and adults. People use bike to their meal please.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不自然且時態錯誤,內容過於簡短。應直接以過去式回答並加一句簡短說明(主題句 + 支持細節),避免冗長或不相關的內容。可以用連接詞補充原因或回憶細節,例如描述擁有時間、用途或感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house and around the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 答案語法錯誤嚴重,內容混亂且缺乏具體細節。應直接給出觀點(主題句),然後用一到兩句具體的支持細節,例如誰常騎、在哪些情況下使用、為何受歡迎或面臨哪些限制。使用連接詞讓句子更連貫。避免無意義片語。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular, especially in cities and small towns. Many students and workers cycle to school or work because it is cheap and convenient, although traffic and weather can sometimes make cycling difficult.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句使用現在式(have)與面試官以過去式詢問的問題(Did you have...)時態不一致。應使用過去式助動詞 did 加上動詞原形或直接用過去式回應,所以將「have」改為「did」或完整回答為 “Yes, I did.” 這樣時態一致且符合英文習慣表達。
× Of course many people in our country is like for example, the classes easily represent the school and adults.
✓ Of course, many people in our country like them; for example, students often ride to school and adults ride for work.
原句中有多處語法錯誤: 1) 主語 many people 為複數,但用 is(單數)造成主謂不一致,應使用複數動詞如 like。這屬於主謂一致錯誤。 2) 整句結構混亂(句子結構錯誤),例如 classes easily represent the school 沒有清晰意義,應改為 “students often ride to school” 表達學生騎車上學。 因此建議重寫句子,先用正確主謂一致:Many people ... like them;再用清晰例子:students often ride to school and adults ride for work。
× People use bike to their meal please.
✓ People use bikes to go to get meals. / People use bikes to go buy food.
原句中介詞和詞序使用不當:"use bike to their meal please" 不符合英語慣用搭配。表達去買吃的或去吃飯應使用動詞片語 go to buy food / go to get meals,且名詞 bike 應用複數或加冠詞(bikes / a bike)。建議改為 “People use bikes to go buy food.” 或 “People use bikes to go get meals.” 以便語意清楚且介詞正確。