Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have a bike when I when I just child. It is my father Disney and is a old bike. I usually use that to go to school or uh player with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Is very popular. We go to school, maybe by bike, and go to.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 语法与时态错误较多,应使用正确的过去时并简化句子结构;增强表达清晰度和细节;避免重复口头语(如“uh”)并使用连接词使句子连贯。可具体说明自行车的外观、谁拥有、常用场景和一两个简短的回忆细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It belonged to my father and was quite old, painted blue with a slightly rusted chain. I often used it to ride to school and sometimes to play with my friends at the nearby park.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 44.0Gợi ý: 句子不完整且缺乏细节。需要用完整句子回答并给出具体原因或例子,使用连接词(for example, because)来组织句子。可以说明普及原因、使用场景和对交通的影响。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students ride bikes to school and people often use them for short trips to the market or to visit friends.
× Yes I have a bike when I when I just child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
原句使用現在時態“have”與“When I… child”時間點(過去)不一致,應使用過去時。並且缺少be動詞“was”。建議:談論過去經歷時用過去時(had, was)。注意完整句子結構並加上標點。
× It is my father Disney and is a old bike.
✓ It belonged to my father, Dennis, and it was an old bike.
原句中“my father Disney”缺少所有格或動詞關係,且名字可能拼寫錯誤;此外使用現在時“is”與描述過去物品不符,冠詞用法也錯(a old → an old)。建議:如果表達過去所有關係可用“belonged to my father”;描述過去用過去時“was”;拼寫人名並在需要時使用逗號分隔。
× I usually use that to go to school or uh player with my friends.
✓ I usually used it to go to school or play with my friends.
原句中“player”是名詞或拼寫錯誤,應為動詞“play”。此外句子描述過去習慣應用過去時“used”。“that”指代不自然,改為“it”。建議:注意動詞形式(play),以及與時間一致使用過去時態。
× Is very popular.
✓ They are very popular.
原句缺少主語且使用錯誤的動詞形式。回答問題時主語應為“bikes”或“they”,用複數be動詞“are”。建議:確定主語並使用正確的動詞形式(例如“Bikes are very popular.”)。
× We go to school, maybe by bike, and go to.
✓ We go to school, maybe by bike, and so on.
原句結尾“and go to”不完整且介詞用法不當。若想表達“等等”可用“and so on”或補充具體動作。建議:避免句子未完成,使用合適短語(and so on / and ride them for other things)。