Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and relevant to the question (child), use correct grammar and concise structure, and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid contradictory ages and redundant phrases. Also correct vocabulary (e.g. “actually”, “bought”, “for commuting and exercise”, “on weekends”).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I only bought my first bike when I was twenty-five because I needed a reliable way to commute to work and to exercise on weekends. Since then, I usually ride it three times a week for about 30–40 minutes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence answering the question, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Use correct pronouns and word order, avoid repetition, and be concrete about why bikes are popular (e.g. cost, convenience, environment).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people choose bicycles because they are cheap to run and convenient for short trips; moreover, they help reduce traffic and pollution. As a result, you can see many cycle lanes and bike-sharing schemes in cities.

× No, actually I didn't have a bike when I was eighteen.

✓ No, actually I didn't have a bike when I was eighteen.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no change needed. It uses the past simple negative 'didn't have' appropriately to describe a past state.

× I bought my new bike when I was twenty five and I visually bought it for my work and exercising in weekend on weekends.

✓ I bought my new bike when I was twenty-five, and I originally bought it for my work and for exercising on weekends.

Errors: 'visually' is incorrect word choice (word choice/usage error) and 'in weekend on weekends' is incorrect preposition and repetition. Grammar Problem Type List includes Past tense issue (5) and Incorrect use of prepositions (11) and Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (13). The main tense 'bought' is correct (past simple). Correction uses 'originally' (appropriate adverb) and fixes preposition to 'on weekends'. Also hyphenate 'twenty-five'. Suggestion: choose appropriate adverbs (originally, primarily) and use 'on weekends' for habitual weekend activities.

× Yes, I think myself super popular in our country because every people know how they work, my bike and bike is important for our personal life and we arrived arrived at this place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because everyone knows how they work. My bike is important for my personal life and helped me arrive at this place.

Multiple issues: 'I think myself super popular' is incorrect pronoun/reflexive use (type 12) — use 'I think bikes are very popular' or 'I think I am very popular' depending on meaning. 'every people' is wrong; use 'everyone' (quantifier/pronoun). 'know how they work' is acceptable for bikes. Repetition 'my bike and bike' is ungrammatical. 'we arrived arrived at this place' repeats word and unclear subject; if referring to the speaker arriving, use 'helped me arrive at this place' (clarifies cause). Corrections address pronoun use, quantifier, repetition, and sentence coherence. Suggestions: avoid reflexive 'myself' unless reflexive meaning intended; use 'everyone' for all people; keep subject consistent and avoid duplicated words.