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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did I had a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短且重复,可增加细节来展示语言能力。建议在主题句后用1–2句说明细节,例如描述什么样的自行车、什么时候学会骑、与谁一起骑或骑车的感受,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意避免冗余和句子过长。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me when I was six. I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park and I often rode it with my older brother, which made me feel independent and happy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答明确但缺乏具体支持。建议给出具体理由或举例来支持观点,例如提到城市自行车道、通勤习惯、健身或环境意识等,并使用连接词(because, for example, moreover)使论述更有逻辑。控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities, because many people use them for short commutes to avoid traffic. For example, there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike programs that make cycling convenient and affordable.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes I did I had a bike when I was a child.

Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

问题类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句缺少标点导致两句话连在一起,影响可读性和逻辑划分。建议在口语或书写中用逗号或句号分隔独立从句;在此处应分成两句:先简短回答“Yes, I did.”,然后补充说明“I had a bike when I was a child.”。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country

Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country.

问题类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句缺少逗号和句末标点,影响书面表达的清晰度。建议在“Yes”后加逗号作为简短回答的自然停顿,并在句末加句号。此外,时态使用(一般现在时)正确,保持不变。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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