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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I don't think so because lots of people using cars instead of bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 문장이 문법적으로는 맞지만 더 자연스럽고 풍부하게 답하려면 토픽 문장 후에 간단한 세부사항을 추가하세요. 예를 들어 언제부터 몇 살까지 탔는지, 어떤 종류의 자전거였는지, 자전거와 관련된 기억(친구들과 타던 경험 등)을 덧붙이면 답변이 더 구체적이고 설득력 있어집니다. 또한 간결함을 위해 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 제한하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from about age six to ten, and I used to ride it to the park with my friends almost every weekend. It was a simple bike with training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them within a few months.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 문법(동사 형태, 관사)과 자연스러운 연결을 개선해야 합니다. 의견을 먼저 밝히는 주제 문장을 쓰고, 그 다음에 이유를 연결어(for example, because, since)를 사용해 구체적인 근거(도시 인프라, 날씨, 문화 등)를 제시하세요. 또한 대체 의견이나 예상을 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. This is mainly because many people prefer cars due to busy lifestyles and limited cycling infrastructure in cities, so cycling is often seen as inconvenient. However, cycling is becoming more common in some areas where bike lanes have been added.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence uses 'did have' which is grammatically correct but redundant in a simple past affirmative answer. Use the simple past 'had' to match the question's past tense more naturally. Suggestion: answer with 'I had' instead of 'I did have' for natural spoken English.

Verb + -ing form

× Well, I don't think so because lots of people using cars instead of bike.

Well, I don't think so because lots of people use cars instead of bikes.

The phrase 'people using' incorrectly uses the -ing form after 'because' where a finite verb is needed. Use the base form 'use' to agree with the subject 'lots of people'. Also 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'lots of people' and count noun agreement. Suggestion: use 'use cars instead of bikes'.

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