Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and complete the thought. Use linking words to show contrast and sequence. Also keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was very young because my family couldn't afford one. However, when I was in elementary school my father bought a bicycle for me, so I began riding to school and around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Provide a topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words and avoid repetition. Mention who uses bikes, where, and why to make the answer more informative.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many teenagers and commuters use bicycles in cities because they are cheap and convenient, and you can often see groups wearing proper cycling kits on weekends.

× Unfortunately I didn't have a bike, my family we were never really well that well off so we couldn't afford a bike but when I was already in elementary, my father bought a bicycle so that he could

✓ Unfortunately I didn't have a bike because my family was never that well off, so we couldn't afford one. But when I was already in elementary school, my father bought a bicycle.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure issues (ID 26) and a subject-verb agreement/word choice issue (ID 27/22) combined: the clause 'my family we were never really well that well off' is ungrammatical and redundant; use a single subject and correct verb form: 'my family was never that well off.' Run-on sentence: several ideas are joined without proper punctuation; split into two or more sentences and use conjunctions or commas correctly. Also 'in elementary' is incomplete; use 'in elementary school.' Suggestion: simplify clauses, remove redundant pronouns, ensure singular/plural agreement, and split long run-on sentences into clear sentences.

× There are teenagers who are into cycling and I always see them on the streets and they also wear the complete complete suit appropriate for the sport

✓ There are teenagers who are into cycling, and I always see them on the streets; they also wear the complete suit appropriate for the sport.

The original sentence has repetition ('complete complete') and awkward adjective use (ID 13). 'Complete suit appropriate for the sport' is acceptable but sounds more natural as 'the complete suit appropriate for the sport' or 'complete cycling kit.' Also the sentence is long and needs punctuation to separate ideas. Remove duplication and choose a natural noun phrase: 'complete suit' or better 'complete cycling kit.' Suggestion: eliminate repeated words, add proper punctuation, and prefer more idiomatic collocations like 'cycling kit.'