Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a small children by scared that my parents bought for me when I was 7. I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhoods sometimes with 20 weeks at 1st and I often meet with friends to saga for fun.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, that is popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Clarify meaning, correct grammar, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus supportive details. Keep answers natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use correct verb forms and concrete details (age, where, how often, with whom). Use linking words like "and", "so", "because" or "but" to make the reply coherent.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I rode it every afternoon around my neighborhood, often with a few friends. At first I could only pedal slowly, but after a few weeks I got much better and felt very proud.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence then expand with specific reasons or examples. Avoid one-word answers. Use linking words (because, for example, so) and provide at least one concrete detail such as who uses bikes or where they are common.
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, in big cities there are bike lanes and many students ride to university every day.
× Yes, I had a small children by scared that my parents bought for me when I was 7.
✓ Yes, I had a small bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven.
The original sentence uses 'children' (plural noun) where a singular noun 'bicycle' or 'bike' is required; this is an incorrect word choice and adjective use ('small' modifying a wrong noun). Replace 'children' with 'bicycle' and change the relative clause 'by scared' (nonsensical) to 'that' to introduce the clause describing the bicycle. Also write 'seven' as a word for clarity. Suggestion: use the correct noun and clear relative clauses to describe ownership and origin.
× I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhoods sometimes with 20 weeks at 1st and I often meet with friends to saga for fun.
✓ I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood, sometimes with 20 weeks at first, and I often met with friends to cycle for fun.
Several issues relate to verb forms and word choice. 'Used to ride' is correct for past habitual action, but 'I often meet' should be past tense 'I often met' to match the past timeframe. 'Saga' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'cycle' or 'ride'. 'Neighborhoods' should be singular 'neighborhood' when speaking of the local area; '20 weeks at 1st' is unclear but likely '20 weeks at first' meaning for the first 20 weeks — keep wording consistent. Ensure past tense consistency across the sentence and use correct verbs for activities.
× Yes, that is popular.
✓ Yes, they are popular.
The question asks about 'bikes' (plural), so the reply must use a plural subject and verb. 'That is' uses a singular demonstrative 'that' and singular verb 'is'. Change to 'they are' to agree in number with 'bikes'. If the speaker meant 'cycling in general,' 'it is popular' could also be used, but to answer the specific question about 'bikes' use the plural form. Ensure subject and verb agree in number.