Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sure, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, everybody.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不自然且语法错误:时态使用不当(应该用过去式),内容过于简短且缺乏细节。建议用一个主题句直接回答并补充1–2个具体细节(如什么时候有、谁给的、经常去哪儿骑),并使用连接词使句子连贯。控制在不超过5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven as a birthday present from my parents, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. It was a red bicycle with training wheels at first, and learning to ride without them was a big milestone for me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且含糊不清(“everybody”不能单独作为完整回答)。建议先直接给出观点,然后用1–2句具体原因或例子说明(比如城市通勤、环保、健身或政府鼓励骑行),并用连接词(because, so, therefore 等)提高连贯性。保持句子自然且不冗长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities, because many people use them for short commutes and to avoid traffic. In recent years the government has also built bike lanes and shared-bike systems, which makes cycling more convenient for everyone.
× Yeah, sure, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
句子使用的時態與提問不一致。考官問的是過去式 “Did you have... when you were a child?”,回答中應使用過去式。原句“I have”是現在完成/現在式,與問題時態不符。建議改用簡單過去 “I did” 或更完整回答 “Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.” 以保持時態一致並提供更自然的回答。
× Yeah, everybody.
✓ Yes, they are. Many people use bikes.
原句“Yeah, everybody.” 結構不完整,缺少動詞,無法清楚回答 “Do you think bikes are popular...?” 這類Yes/No問題需要肯定或否定並通常包含助動詞或主語與動詞。建議改為完整句型,如“Yes, they are.” 或具體說明“Many people use bikes.” 以表達自行車是否受歡迎。