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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I were child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I believe the bikes are quite popular in my country because many of people haven't enough income and the bikes are common and cheap means for transportation.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, my parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood. Because it was lightweight and reliable, I used it almost every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, use more natural phrases and a linking word to organize the reason. Provide one specific example or brief comparison to support your point. Keep sentences short and vocabulary relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and practical. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to the market since public transport can be costly or unreliable. Additionally, bikes are common in smaller towns where distances are short.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I had a bike when I were child.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The verb 'were' does not agree with the singular subject 'I' in this past simple clause; the correct past form is 'was'. Also the noun phrase needs the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use 'I was' for singular first person in past simple and include necessary articles: 'a child'. Grammar problem type ID:27

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I believe the bikes are quite popular in my country because many of people haven't enough income and the bikes are common and cheap means for transportation.

Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country because many people don't have enough income, and bikes are a common and cheap means of transportation.

Multiple issues here tied to pronouns, quantifiers and articles: 'many of people' is incorrect — use 'many people' (no 'of'). 'haven't enough income' is not idiomatic; use 'don't have enough income'. 'the bikes' is unnecessary when speaking generally; use 'bikes'. Also add the article 'a' before 'common and cheap means' and use 'means of transportation' for correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: simplify general statements by dropping 'the' and use standard negative form 'don't have'. Grammar problem type ID:12

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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