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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I do, I have a bike when I am a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Very popular in Indonesia. I think almost every child are playing with their bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Correct the tense and make the response natural and concise. Start with a past-tense topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Use a full sentence and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement). Give a specific reason or example and use a linking word like "because" or "for example" to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Indonesia because they are affordable and practical. For example, many children ride bikes to school or to visit neighbors, especially in smaller towns.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes I do, I have a bike when I am a child.

Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so past tense should be used. 'Do' and 'have' are present tense; use 'did' and 'had' for past. Also use 'was' (past of 'am') for 'I was a child.' Suggestion: match verb tenses to the time reference in the question by using past simple for past situations.

Sentence structure errors

× Very popular in Indonesia.

Bikes are very popular in Indonesia.

This fragment lacks a subject and a finite verb, so it is not a complete sentence. The examiner asked a question requiring a full sentence answer. Add the subject 'Bikes' and the correct present tense verb 'are' to form a complete declarative sentence.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think almost every child are playing with their bike.

I think almost every child is playing with their bike.

The phrase 'every child' is singular, so it requires a singular verb 'is' rather than plural 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'their bike' is acceptable as a gender-neutral singular possessive, but 'his or her bike' is an alternative. Suggestion: use singular verb forms after expressions like 'every' and ensure agreement between subject and verb.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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