Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and give specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler sounds (“uh”). For example, correct verb forms (bought) and clarify purpose (learn to ride, not ‘buy’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought a small bicycle for me when I was six so I could learn to ride. It had training wheels at first, and I spent hours riding it around the park with my friends, which made my childhood more active and fun.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples, using linking words to improve coherence. Remove filler words and informal phrases like “you know.” Mention who rides bikes, where, and why (transport, exercise, leisure) for more content variety.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For instance, many people cycle in the evenings after dinner because it is a convenient and low-cost way to exercise. Additionally, city bike lanes and shared-bike schemes make cycling a practical option for short trips to work or the market.

× Yes, definitely my father bought, bought a bike for me to uh, train how to buy bike and uh, it's, it was a toy for me to entertain myself.

✓ Yes, definitely; my father bought a bike for me to learn how to ride it, and it was a toy for me to entertain myself.

The original sentence contains awkward verb choice and repetition. 'Train how to buy bike' is incorrect for the intended meaning; the past tense verb 'bought' is fine, but the action intended is learning to ride, so use 'learn how to ride it' (verb: learn + infinitive) and include the object 'it'. Also remove duplicate 'bought, bought' and fix punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: use clear verbs for intended actions and remove repetitions.

× Yes, sure. Uh, especially after dinner, uh, most people, uh, love to ride on the road, uh, as a, you know, exercise program.

✓ Yes, sure. Especially after dinner, most people like to ride on the road as a form of exercise.

The sentence uses present tense appropriately, but 'love to ride on the road' is conversationally okay; however, 'as a, you know, exercise program' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'as a form of exercise' or 'for exercise'. Also replace 'love' with 'like' if you prefer neutral tone. Remove filler words 'uh' and 'you know' to make the sentence clear. Suggestion: use clear noun phrase 'form of exercise' and streamline tense-consistent verbs.