Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Here I have a mic and I have a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country. Many people use them for short commute and exercise, especially student and office worker in citizens where traffic is heavy

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 12.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is off-topic and unclear. Directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence (Yes/No) and one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and relevant, avoid unrelated words. Use linking words if you add details (for example: "because", "so", "but").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to visit friends and ride to the park, and I practiced riding every weekend because my parents encouraged outdoor activities.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and a linking word to improve coherence. Correct grammar (e.g. plural/singular, articles) and use more precise vocabulary ("commuting", "students", "office workers", "urban areas"). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are a cheap and healthy way to travel. Many people use bikes for short commutes and exercise, especially students and office workers in busy urban areas where traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect word choice / sentence structure

× Here I have a mic and I have a child.

✓ No, I didn't. I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's question and uses incorrect nouns ('mic' and 'child') instead of discussing a bicycle. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue not listed exactly, but it fits under 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). The corrected sentence uses the past tense 'had' to match the past-time question 'Did you have', places the negative 'No, I didn't.' if applicable, and clearly states possession of a bicycle. Suggestion: listen to the question carefully and respond with a sentence that matches its tense and topic, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bicycle' or 'No, I didn't have a bicycle.'

Singular and plural issue

× Many people use them for short commute and exercise, especially student and office worker in citizens where traffic is heavy

✓ Many people use them for short commutes and exercise, especially students and office workers in cities where traffic is heavy.

Errors: 'short commute' should be plural 'short commutes' to match 'many people'; 'student' and 'office worker' need plural forms 'students' and 'office workers'; 'in citizens' is incorrect—use 'in cities'. This is a singular/plural issue (ID 1) as well as preposition/word choice mistakes (ID 11), but per instructions only correct mistakes that meet the provided list; thus plural corrections are applied. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree in number with quantifiers like 'many' and with 'people'; change singular nouns to plural when referring to groups (students, office workers) and make countable noun phrases plural (commutes).

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Heavy— Weighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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