Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is my need. So many children like riding bike in the on the weekend and every most of people like reading, like writing after work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议给出主题句后补充1–2个具体细节(如谁送的、什么时候学会骑、骑车的频率或与谁一起骑),并使用连接词使表达更自然。例如可以说“I did. I learned to ride when I was six, and my father taught me. We often rode to the park on weekends, which was great fun.” 这样可以展示流利度和内容丰富度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I learned to ride when I was six and my father taught me, so I was quite confident by the time I started school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误,信息混杂且与问题不完全相关。建议先给出明确的主题句(Yes/No + 简短理由),然后用1–2个具体事实或比较支撑,使用连接词(because, for example, however)。句子要注意主谓一致和词序。示例结构:主题句 + 原因 + 具体例子/对比。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, children often ride bikes to the park at the weekend, and some adults cycle to work to avoid traffic.
× Yes, it is my need.
✓ Yes, they are popular; I need one.
原句中代词使用错误。问句是“Do you think bikes are popular...?” 回答应针对复数的“bikes”或表达个人需要。原句“It is my need.” 用了单数主语 it,不清楚指代,且表达不自然。建议使用“They are popular”表示普遍情况,或用“I need one”表示个人需求。两者根据说话意图选择。
× So many children like riding bike in the on the weekend and every most of people like reading, like writing after work.
✓ Many children like riding bikes on the weekend, and most people enjoy reading or writing after work.
原句存在量词和限定词使用错误。“So many children” 可以改为“Many children” 更自然;“riding bike” 名词单复数错误,改为“riding bikes”。短语“in the on the weekend” 包含多余词,正确为“on the weekend”。“and every most of people” 语序和限定词错误,应为“most people”。并列部分“like reading, like writing” 冗余,可用“enjoy reading or writing”。整体修改保持时态和语义一致。