Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's popular in my pantry is very convenient or pebble.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 supporting details. Use linking words if you add details. Keep your answer natural and within 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. Because I practiced every day, I became confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and contains incorrect words. Start with a direct statement about popularity, then add specific reasons (for example: cost, convenience, traffic, environment). Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas and keep sentences concise (max 3–4 sentences).
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work in crowded cities, and cycling is also encouraged for health and environmental reasons.
× Yes, I think it's popular in my pantry is very convenient or pebble.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are very convenient and inexpensive.
The original sentence misused pronouns and contained nonsensical phrases ('my pantry', 'pebble') that do not refer to 'bikes'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary. Also the sentence mixed two ideas without proper connectors. Correcting it requires: 1) Replacing 'it's' (singular pronoun) with 'bikes are' to agree with the plural subject 'bikes' and the question about 'bikes', addressing subject-pronoun agreement (related to pronoun use and number). 2) Replacing 'my pantry is very convenient or pebble' with a coherent reason such as 'because they are very convenient and inexpensive'. Suggestion: keep the subject consistent (bikes) and use clear adjectives or nouns that logically describe bikes; connect ideas with conjunctions like 'because' to explain reasons.