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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a purple bike when I was a kid. My mom bought it for me as a birthday cake. Birthday gift.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

It used to be popular in my country but now we cars are becoming more popular because it's more convenient.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且信息完整。第一句回答可以保留,但后面细节要连贯,避免断句和错误用词(例如“bought it for me as a birthday cake”是不合适的表达,应为“bought it for my birthday”或“as a birthday gift”)。建议用1个主题句加1–2个支持句,说明什么时候得到、为什么记得、是否经常骑等,使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a purple bike that my mother bought for my birthday when I was about seven, and I remember riding it to the park almost every weekend because it was my favorite toy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更准确和自然,注意语法(例如“now we cars are becoming”应为“now cars are becoming”或“we are using cars more”)。建议先给出直接观点,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持,使用连接词如“because”或“however”来衔接。还可补充对未来趋势或个人看法以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: They used to be very popular, but cars have become more common now because they are more convenient for long distances and carry more people. However, I think cycling is gaining attention again for environmental reasons and in some cities bike-sharing programs are becoming popular.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× My mom bought it for me as a birthday cake. Birthday gift.

My mom bought it for me as a birthday gift.

原句中用 "as a birthday cake" 明显不合逻辑:生日蛋糕 (birthday cake) 是食物,不适合作为礼物的表述。其次句子被分为两个断句("Birthday gift."),使句子不连贯。应使用 "birthday gift" 表示生日礼物,合并为一完整句子。建议在类似语境中使用正确名词短语并保持句子完整。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× It used to be popular in my country but now we cars are becoming more popular because it's more convenient.

It used to be popular in my country, but now cars are becoming more popular because they are more convenient.

原句有主谓一致和代词使用问题:"we cars" 结构不正确,可能想说 "cars" 或 "we" 中的一种;此外后半句用 "it's more convenient" 指代不明确,应该用复数代词 "they" 指代复数名词 "cars",并且动词形式应与主语一致。改为 "cars are becoming... because they are..."。建议检查主语与动词/代词的一致性,避免混合主语形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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