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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I like going to school by bike when I was in junior school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I think bugs were popular in several years ago because now this more and more people like to go to everywhere by car.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、时态一致并适度展开。注意时态一致:描述过去经历时用过去时;避免重复信息和语法错误。可以先用主题句直接回答,然后用1–2个简短句子补充细节(比如什么时候、和谁、骑车的感觉或频率)。连词可用because或so来解释原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike throughout primary and junior school, and I often rode it to school with my friends. It was a quick and enjoyable way to get there because the school was only a few kilometers from home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: 回答要逻辑清晰、语法正确并提供具体细节。注意单词拼写(bikes),时态和对比表达。可以先直接给出观点,然后用原因或例子支持,用连接词如However或Because来衔接。尽量提供具体时间或数据来增强说服力。

Ví dụ: I used to think bikes were more popular a few years ago, but now fewer people cycle because many families prefer cars for convenience. For example, in my city a lot of people drive to work, and bike lanes have become less crowded.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I did. I like going to school by bike when I was in junior school.

Yes, I did. I liked going to school by bike when I was in junior school.

原句中第一句为过去时("I did"),后句描述过去经常性的动作,应使用过去时表达习惯性行为。将现在时 "like" 改为过去时 "liked" 与句子时态一致。建议:描述过去习惯时使用过去一般时(例如:I lived, I liked, I often went)。

Incorrect word choice / Sentence structure errors

× Well, I think bugs were popular in several years ago because now this more and more people like to go to everywhere by car.

Well, I think bikes were popular several years ago, but now more and more people like to go everywhere by car.

原句存在多个问题: 1) 将 "bugs"(错误拼写)改为正确单词 "bikes"(不是列在清单中的语法类型,但为必要的词汇更正)。 2) "in several years ago" 结构不正确,表示过去时应使用 "several years ago"(与时态一致)。这是句子结构错误,应改正为 "several years ago"。 (对应清单中的句子结构错误) 3) "because now this more and more people" 逻辑与表达不当,使用 "but now" 更符合前后转折关系;去掉多余的指示代词 "this"。 4) "go to everywhere" 中介词使用错误,应为 "go everywhere"(不加介词)或 "go to places"。 综合改为:"Well, I think bikes were popular several years ago, but now more and more people like to go everywhere by car." 建议:注意拼写、时态一致、使用恰当连词(but/because)表达因果或转折,以及常见搭配(go everywhere 不用 to)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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