Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, we do democracy. That, I do think is.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Focus on relevant vocabulary (bike, ride, learn, neighbourhood, parents). Avoid repeating the examiner's question.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because the park was quiet and safe, I practised there every weekend, which helped me become confident riding on the road later.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Respond directly to the question and give clear reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, however) and relevant vocabulary (popular, transportation, commute, health, environment). Avoid unrelated or vague statements and keep to 1–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and save money. For example, students and office workers often cycle to work or school, and there are also dedicated bike lanes in several cities which makes cycling safer.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Did you have bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The noun 'bike' is countable and in this context requires an article. Use the singular indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'bike' to form 'a bike'.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, we do democracy. That, I do think is.

✓ Yes, we have democracy. I do think that is true.

The original response is ungrammatical and awkward. 'Do democracy' is incorrect because 'democracy' is a noun and English uses verbs like 'have' to indicate possessing a system. The second clause 'That, I do think is.' has incorrect word order and missing complement; 'I do think that is true' is a natural, complete sentence. Suggestion: use 'have democracy' to express that the country has a democratic system and reorder the second clause to place the subject and verb in normal order and include an adjective like 'true'.

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