Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid and I often went to school with my friend by bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, definitely, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially we have shared bike right now so people can use those bike went to the subway station or just go to a short term destination. I think
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答整体清晰,但可以更自然与具体。改进点:1) 开头用更直接的主题句,例如“I had a bike when I was a child.” 2) 用连接词和细节丰富句子,比如说明频率、年龄或路线(how often, how far, who with)。3) 避免重复词汇(kid/child/bike重复),用代词或同义词替换。4) 控制句子数量,不超过5句并保持简洁。
Ví dụ: I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day with a friend, which took about ten minutes each way. Riding together was fun and helped us save time compared to walking.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答包含观点,但表达有语法与连贯问题。改进点:1) 用更自然的开头并直接给出立场,例如“Yes, bikes are very popular.” 2) 使用正确的时态与语法(e.g. “we have shared bikes”而不是“shared bike”)。3) 用连接词组织原因和例子(e.g. “because…, for example…”)。4) 提供更具体的细节如使用场景、优点或数据,避免句子残缺。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, shared bike services are common, so commuters often ride to the nearest subway station or run quick errands nearby.
× Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid and I often went to school with my friend by bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid and I often went to school with my friend by bike.
原句語法正確,不需要改動。句子使用過去時描述兒時經歷,動詞時態一致,‘by bike’ 作方式狀語使用恰當。
× Well, definitely, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially we have shared bike right now so people can use those bike went to the subway station or just go to a short term destination. I think
✓ Well, definitely. I think bikes are popular in my country, especially now that we have shared bikes, so people can use those bikes to get to the subway station or to go to short-distance destinations.
問題類型ID應為8(動詞 + -ing形式)與11(介詞使用)和1(單複數)混合,但依指示只修正符合清單的錯誤:原句中“went to the subway station”使用了過去式,與現在時語境不符,應使用不定式或原形動詞(to get)表示目的;“shared bike”和“those bike”有單複數一致問題,應為“shared bikes”和“those bikes”;“short term destination”習慣用法為“short-distance destinations”。建議:用“now that”引導原因狀語,使用“to get/to go to”表達目的,注意名詞複數形式與修飾語的連字符。