Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法と語順の誤りを直し、意味を明確にする必要があります。まず、短く直接的な主題文（例: "Yes, I did."）から始め、その後で具体的な状況を時制・所有格に注意して説明してください。接続詞や時の表現を使って文をつなげ、語彙はシンプルで正確な単語を選びましょう。例えば、"my brother's eight" や時制の一致（have → had）は不自然なので、正しい所有表現と過去形を用いる練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was eight, my brother bought a new bike, so I got his old one. I rode it to school almost every day because it was the easiest way to get around.

Gợi ý: 文法、語順、語彙選択と冗長表現を改善してください。まず主題文で明確に答え（"Yes, they are."）し、続けて理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べます。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を適切に使い、繰り返しや不明瞭な語（"rows rows"）は避けましょう。また、複数形や代名詞の一致（our country の構造）に注意してください。短く具体的な例（通勤や狭い道）を加えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: Yes, they are. Bicycles are a common mode of transport in my country because many streets are narrow and congested. As a result, people often prefer bikes for short trips and daily commuting.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about possession in the past. In short answers about past possession, English uses the auxiliary did rather than had alone. 'I had' is not a natural short response to 'Did you have a bike?' Use 'Yes, I did.' to reflect the past-tense question.

× My school is with my brother's eight before but my brother have new one so old one is mine.

✓ When I was eight, I went to school with my brother, but my brother has a new bike now, so his old one became mine.

The original sentence mixes time reference, possession and verb forms and lacks clear sentence structure. Reorder the information: state the time ('when I was eight'), the action ('I went to school with my brother'), then the change of possession ('my brother has a new bike now, so his old one became mine'). Also correct verb agreement: 'have' should be 'has' for third person singular, and use past simple 'became' to describe the change.

× Yes. Bikes are popular in my country we used to it every day every time because our Our country rows rows is very narrow. So we used bicycles.

✓ Yes. Bikes are popular in my country; we use them every day because the roads in our country are very narrow, so we use bicycles.

Multiple tense and word-choice problems: 'we used to it' is incorrect; use present simple 'we use them' to state a habitual fact. 'Our Our country rows rows is very narrow' contains repeated words and incorrect nouns: 'rows rows' should be 'roads' and plural subject 'roads' requires 'are'. Maintain consistent present tense for general statements and replace vague phrases with clear nouns ('them' referring to bikes).