Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course it's popular. I see children every day, uh, riding it. And also I see, uh, foreign people or people who works here from India or Bangladesh, uh, every day using them maybe to go to work or like that.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. Always answer directly with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words (for example, 'and', 'so', 'because', 'also') when adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to visit my friends and ride to the park, and it helped me learn balance and confidence. Because our neighborhood was quiet, my parents felt comfortable letting me ride around on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is informal and contains hesitations and grammar errors. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, removing fillers ('uh'), correcting grammar (e.g., 'people who work'), and adding a specific reason or example using linking words ('because', 'for example'). Keep answers concise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'commonly used', 'widely popular').

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and practical. For example, I often see children riding bikes to school, and many migrant workers use bicycles to commute to work every day because public transport can be crowded.

Ngữ pháp

Third person singular issue

× Of course it's popular.

✓ Of course they're popular.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb must agree: use 'they're' (they are) instead of 'it's' (it is). Change 'it' to 'they' to match plural noun 'bikes'. Suggestion: Identify the noun number (singular/plural) and make the pronoun and verb agree (they + are).

Verb in the present participle form

× I see children every day, uh, riding it.

✓ I see children every day riding them.

'Riding' is the present participle and is fine, but the pronoun 'it' refers incorrectly to plural 'bikes'. Use 'them' to match plural. Also remove unnecessary filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: Match pronouns to the noun number and keep participle clause attached to the correct subject.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× And also I see, uh, foreign people or people who works here from India or Bangladesh, uh, every day using them maybe to go to work or like that.

✓ Also, I see foreign people or people who work here from India or Bangladesh using them every day, maybe to go to work.

The verb 'works' is incorrect because the subject 'people' is plural; use 'work'. The sentence is long and contains filler 'uh' and awkward phrasing 'or like that'. Reorder for clarity: move 'using them' next to the subject and place 'every day' appropriately. Suggestion: Use plural verb forms with plural subjects, remove fillers, and simplify the phrase for clearer expression.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Foreign— Overseas; Unfamiliar
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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