Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I don't have a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bikes are popular in my country because most of the people uses it and ride their bikes every afternoon.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Grammar and naturalness: use correct past tense and contractions appropriately. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail (reason or memory) using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences. For example, say whether you had one, why or why not, and a short specific detail (who bought it, where you rode it, or a memory).
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school with my friends, because my family lived close by. However, I remember borrowing my cousin’s bicycle sometimes and practicing in the park every weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Grammar and fluency: correct subject-verb agreement and make the statement more specific and concise. Begin with a topic sentence giving a clear opinion, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, for instance, or moreover). Mention who rides them, when, or why to add concreteness. Keep it under five sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, lots of families and commuters ride bicycles in the late afternoon to avoid traffic, and some cities have bike lanes that make cycling safer.
× I don't have a bike when I was a child.
✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I didn't have', 'I had'). Grammar problem type's ID: 6
× I think bikes are popular in my country because most of the people uses it and ride their bikes every afternoon.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because most people use them and ride their bikes every afternoon.
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