Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct articles and verb forms (e.g., “borrow someone else's bike”) and avoid informal phrases like “perform some stuff.” Add a linking word if you give an additional reason or example.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I often borrowed a neighbour's bike to ride to school or visit friends, which taught me to be careful and grateful.

Gợi ý: Give a clear main opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid filler words like “uh” and informal phrases. Replace vague descriptions with concrete details (e.g., types of bikes, occasions when people use them) and explain your personal view briefly.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work and students often take photos with stylish scooters at tourist spots. Personally, I admire expensive sports bikes for their design and performance.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child as my family couldn't afford it so I used to borrow someone else bike to perform some stuff.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one, so I used to borrow someone else's bike to do some things.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'someone else bike' should be possessive 'someone else's bike' (pronoun/possessive error). Also 'as' can be natural but 'because' is clearer for cause; 'one' replaces repeating 'a bike' (quantifier/article clarity); 'perform some stuff' is informal and unidiomatic — use 'do some things'. Suggestion: use possessive form for nouns after someone/something, use 'one' to avoid repetition, and use clear, more formal verbs instead of 'perform' with 'stuff'.

× Yeah, bikes are really popular in my country. Even whenever people get chance to click a picture with a nice bike, they just go for it. And uh. I also love expensive bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country. Whenever people get the chance to take a picture with a nice bike, they go for it. I also like expensive bikes.

Errors: 'Even whenever' is redundant; use 'Whenever' or 'Even when'. Missing article in 'get chance' — should be 'get the chance' (article error). 'Click a picture' is informal/inaccurate — use 'take a picture'. 'They just go for it' is acceptable but 'just' can be omitted for clarity. 'And uh.' is a filler; remove. 'I also love expensive bikes' is grammatical but 'like' is more natural here. Suggestions: remove fillers, use correct articles, choose natural collocations (take a picture), and avoid redundancies.