Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, use correct verb tense, reduce hesitation and repetition, and add one or two clear supporting details. Start with a concise topic sentence in past tense (since it refers to childhood), then give a brief specific detail (who gave it, your age, why it was memorable). Use linking words to improve flow.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had my first bike when I was about eight. My uncle gave it to me as a gift when he returned from living abroad, and I remember it well because it was bright red and lasted through many adventures.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use clearer sentence structure and linking words, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific examples or a short comparison. Begin with a clear statement, then add contrasted details (children vs adults) and a brief reason or trend.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many schoolchildren ride bicycles to school, while adults increasingly prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for commuting.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use past tense pronoun/verb form. 'Do have' is present; change to 'had' to match past time frame.

× one of my uncle who who lived abroad when, uh, he come back to our country and he gave me a gift

✓ one of my uncles who lived abroad came back to our country and gave me a gift

Plural needed: 'one of my uncles' (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 27). Relative clause and verb forms should be past: 'who lived abroad' and 'came back'. Also remove redundant pronoun 'he' before 'came back' and use past simple 'gave' to match sequence.

× which is say my first bike and I still remembered because, uh, there was one of the best gate that I.

✓ which was my first bike, and I still remember it because it was one of the best gifts I ever received.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use past reference consistently: 'which was my first bike'. 'I still remembered' should be 'I still remember' if the memory is current, or 'I still remembered' if narrating past—here 'I still remember' is more natural. 'gate' is a typo for 'gift' and phrase 'that I' incomplete; complete with 'I ever received'.

× Very much popular, uh, if you consider the bicycle, uh, it's pretty much popular, uh, for the younger age people, uh, for example, the school schoolboy or girl who went to school by bicycle.

✓ Bicycles are very popular among young people; for example, schoolboys and schoolgirls often go to school by bicycle.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect word order. Use 'Bicycles are popular' (plural agreement) and the preposition 'among' for groups. 'Younger age people' should be 'young people'. 'School schoolboy or girl' is repetitive; use 'schoolboys and schoolgirls' or 'schoolchildren'.

× And for the adult, the motorbike is increasingly popular day by day.

✓ And for adults, motorbikes are becoming increasingly popular.

Number agreement: 'adult' should be plural 'adults' and 'motorbike' plural 'motorbikes'. 'Is increasingly popular day by day' is wordy; use 'are becoming increasingly popular' to express ongoing trend in present tense.