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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Almost every child bikes every day riding bikes.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınız soruyu tekrar etmekten ibaret; bu, puanınızı düşürür. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve kısa bir açıklama/ayrıntı ekleyin. Örneğin sahip olup olmadığınızı belirtin, kısa bir neden veya anı ekleyin ve 2–4 cümleyle sınırlı kalın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (for example, because, so) ifadeyi mantıklı hale getirin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park behind our house. Because I practiced every afternoon, I became quite confident and rarely fell.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğrudan ve anlaşılır fakat tekrarlayıcı ve fazla genel. Daha özgül örnekler, sebep ve karşılaştırma ekleyin; bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birleştirin. Cümle sayısını 2–4 arasında tutun ve daha çeşitli kelime dağarcığı kullanmaya çalışın (e.g. common, widespread, commute, leisure).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people find them an affordable and healthy way to travel. For example, children often ride to school and adults use bikes for short commutes or exercise, especially in cities with bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Almost every child bikes every day riding bikes.

Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Almost every child rides a bike every day.

The phrase 'bikes every day riding bikes' is awkward and contains a verb choice issue. 'Bike' as a verb (to bike) is less common than 'ride a bike' in this context, and the sentence repeats 'bikes' unnecessarily. Also plural 'every child bikes' is acceptable but sounds unnatural; 'every child rides a bike every day' uses the simple present to express habitual action correctly. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and avoid repeating the noun; use 'rides a bike' for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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