Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

It's very.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,而且只是重复了考官的话。建议:1) 直接用一句主题句回答(有或没有),2) 用1-2句具体细节扩展,比如什么时候得到的、用途或印象,3) 使用连接词(for example, when, because)使表达连贯。注意句子不宜超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood. For example, every weekend my father would take me to the park to practice, which helped me become more confident and independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不完整且语法错误,未直接回答问题的主体,并缺少具体细节。建议:1) 使用完整句子直接表达观点(e.g. Yes, they are very popular because...),2) 提供1-2个具体原因或例子,3) 使用连接词(because, for example, especially)增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities where traffic is heavy. For example, many people prefer cycling for short trips because it is cheap, healthy and often faster than driving during rush hour.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

原句实际上是考官的问题,学生重复了考官的话。问题本身没有语法错误,但学生应作答而不是复述。建议学生在回答过去时的“有/没有”问题时使用简洁的过去时回答,如“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn't.” 这样更符合口语交流习惯。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's very.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

原句“It’s very.” 不完整且语法不正确。考官问的是“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?”(复数主语bikes),正确回答应与复数主语一致,且需要完整的形容词短语。建议使用完整的句子如“Yes, they are very popular.” 或 “Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.” 注意主语与谓语的一致以及形容词popular前需要有名词或系动词结构来承接。

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