Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Keep responses concise (1–3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (past tense), use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. “bike,” “borrow,” “friends”), and avoid unrelated words like “Wi‑Fi” or “fragile.” For example, say whether you had a bike, and then explain how you travelled to school or how you sometimes used a friend’s bike.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school, although sometimes I borrowed a friend’s bike for short trips around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: This answer is ungrammatical and doesn’t respond properly. Begin with a direct opinion (Yes/No) and support it with a specific reason or example, using linking words (e.g. “because,” “for example,” “so”). Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid irrelevant phrases like “I’m going to never work.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them as a cheap and convenient way to travel. For example, students and workers often cycle short distances to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× I did not have my Wi-Fi or fragile because my family could not afford my, he said.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family could not afford one.

Original sentence has incorrect and inconsistent pronouns and wrong vocabulary: 'my Wi-Fi or fragile' and ending 'my, he said' are incorrect. This is a pronoun and word choice issue (Grammar Problem Type 12). Use the indefinite pronoun 'one' to refer back to 'a bike' and use 'a' before singular count noun. The corrected sentence restores meaning, keeps past tense to match the question, and uses proper pronouns and determiners. Suggestion: Identify the noun you refer to (bike) and use 'one' or 'a bike' instead of 'my' when speaking about not owning any.

× I usually walk to school and sometimes watch an overlap for your friends, which I enjoy.

✓ I usually walked to school and sometimes played with my friends, which I enjoyed.

Original sentence mixes tenses and contains incorrect phrases: 'watch an overlap for your friends' is ungrammatical and 'your friends' is the wrong pronoun. This is primarily a sentence structure and pronoun choice issue (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 12). Because the context is past habits, use past tense 'walked' and 'played with my friends.' 'Which I enjoyed' stays in past to match. Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent for past habits and use appropriate verbs and pronouns (played with my friends).

× Because every people have one bike, I'm going to never work.

✓ Because almost everyone has a bike, I will never walk to work.

Original sentence has incorrect quantifier 'every people' (should be 'everyone' or 'every person') and wrong tense/word order in 'I'm going to never work.' This is a quantifier and future tense/word order issue (Grammar Problem Type 14 and 7). The corrected sentence uses 'almost everyone' as a natural quantifier and 'I will never walk to work' to express future intention; note adverb placement 'never' comes before the main verb. Suggestion: Use 'everyone' for people in general and place adverbs (never) before the main verb in future tense (will never walk).