Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy, word choice and clarity. Start with a clear, direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and possessives, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details (when, who gave it, how often you used it) with simple linking words like “when” or “because.” Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a red bicycle for my seventh birthday, and I rode it every day after school. I learned to ride with my older brother’s help, and it quickly became my favourite way to play and explore the neighbourhood.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) followed by specific supporting details and linking words. Use correct vocabulary ('bicycles' or 'bikes'), proper verb forms, and provide examples or reasons (e.g., commuting, exercise, traffic). Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Many people use bikes to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities, and there are also growing cycling clubs and bike lanes in large towns.

× Just I did.

✓ I did, just.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. In English, the adverb 'just' typically comes after the subject and auxiliary or at the end of a short affirmative response: 'I did, just.' Alternatively, 'Just' can begin a sentence but needs a complete clause after it. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural positions (after subject/auxiliary or at end).

× I had read bicycle that my parents bought from me for me at my 7th birthday.

✓ I had a red bicycle that my parents bought for me for my seventh birthday.

Multiple errors: 'read' is a misspelling of the adjective 'red' describing 'bicycle' (adjective error). Also article use and preposition ordering are wrong: use 'a red bicycle' (article + adjective + noun) and 'bought for me' (correct preposition). 'At my 7th birthday' is unidiomatic; use 'for my seventh birthday.' Suggestion: check adjective spelling, use correct article 'a', and use 'bought for me' and 'for my seventh birthday.'

× I used to write every day.

✓ I used to ride it every day.

The verb 'write' is incorrect for describing bicycle use; 'used to' indicates a past habitual action and should be followed by the correct verb 'ride.' Suggestion: choose verbs that match the activity described; 'ride' is collocated with 'bicycle.'

× You just Bike cycles are popular in my country.

✓ Bicycles are popular in my country.

The phrase has incorrect words and capitalization: 'You just Bike cycles' is ungrammatical. The correct plural noun is 'bicycles.' Remove extraneous words like 'you just' unless context requires them. Suggestion: use the simple plural noun 'bicycles' and keep initial letter lowercase unless starting a sentence.

× People are normally using.

✓ People normally use them.

The original lacks an object and has an awkward continuous passive-like form. 'People normally use' is the correct present simple for habitual actions; adding 'them' (referring to bicycles) completes the sentence. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and include the object.

× You usually use.

✓ People usually use them.

'You usually use' is ambiguous and lacks an object; likely intended to mean 'people usually use bicycles.' Replace 'you' with 'people' for a general statement and add the object pronoun 'them.' Suggestion: when making general statements, use 'people' or 'we' and include the object.