Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, use correct past tense, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words (e.g., because, so, and) to show reasons or effects.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a purple bike when I was about eight because purple was my favourite colour. I enjoyed riding it around my neighbourhood with friends because it helped me relax and explore nearby parks.

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles), avoid repetition, and give a clear reason or example using linking words (e.g., however, because, for example). Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I think bicycles are not very popular nationwide, although some people are very enthusiastic about them. For example, cycling clubs in cities often ride together because it’s a convenient way to exercise and socialize, and some people use bikes daily to commute short distances.

× When I was a child, I have a bike, its color was purple, like my favorite color.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike; its color was purple, which was my favorite color.

The sentence mixes past context with a present tense verb 'have'. Use past tense 'had' to match 'When I was a child'. Also replace the comma splice with a semicolon or separate sentences and use 'which was my favorite color' for clarity. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for descriptions of childhood and separate independent clauses correctly.

× I like this because I liked it because it can me relax also across across the across area traveling.

✓ I liked it because it helped me relax when I traveled around the area.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect: 'can me relax' is ungrammatical; use 'helped me relax' to match past tense 'liked'. Remove repeated words 'across'. Use 'when I traveled around the area' for clear meaning and correct verb tense. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and place pronouns and verbs in their correct order: subject + verb + object.

× From my perspective I think that bike in my country is not very famous, but who person who loves who loves bike.

✓ From my perspective, I think that bikes in my country are not very popular, but some people who love bikes do exist.

Number agreement errors: 'bike ... is' should be plural 'bikes ... are' when speaking generally. 'who person who loves who loves bike' is ungrammatical; replace with 'some people who love bikes'. Also 'famous' is better replaced by 'popular' for this context. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and plural verbs for general statements and simplify redundant phrases.

× They really enjoyed it because they everyday can go out.

✓ They really enjoy it because they can go out every day.

Tense inconsistency: 'enjoyed' (past) conflicts with 'can go out' (present). For a general statement about what people do, use present tense 'enjoy' and 'can go out every day'. Also correct adverb placement: 'every day' is two words and follows the verb phrase. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual facts and place adverbs of frequency correctly.

× Also ride a bike with some friends, it helps they to do training.

✓ Also, riding a bike with some friends helps them to train.

Pronoun case error: use 'them' as object, not 'they'. Use gerund 'riding' to make the clause grammatical. 'Do training' is unnatural in English; 'train' or 'get exercise' is preferred. Remove the comma splice by making a single clause. Suggestion: Use correct pronoun forms for objects and use gerunds when a verb functions as a noun or activity.