Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I truly have a bike when I was a child and I ride. I ride my bike to go to the school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think riding a bike is kind of originally ways for people to go outside and you can see many people riding bikes on the road and our country have set many special ways for people to riding.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并纠正时态与语法错误,先给出主句明确回答,然后用一到两句补充具体细节,注意时态一致和冠词使用。可以把重复的内容合并,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it to school every day. It was very convenient and I enjoyed cycling with my friends on the way.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并使用恰当词汇表达原因与例子。避免模糊词如“kind of”并改正单复数和动词形式错误;用连接词(for example, because, therefore)使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and eco-friendly. For example, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and public bike-sharing systems, so a lot of people use bicycles for short trips and commuting.
× Yes, I truly have a bike when I was a child and I ride.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I rode it.
句中描述过去的情况,应使用过去时。原句使用现在时“have”和“ride”与时间状语“when I was a child”冲突。建议将“have”改为过去式“had”,并将“ride”改为过去式“rode”,同时加上宾语“it”使句子完整。
× I ride my bike to go to the school.
✓ I rode my bike to go to school.
英语中在一般表示上学时通常不加定冠词“the”。另外根据前句已改为过去时,这里也应使用过去时“rode”。因此将“the school”改为“school”,并把动词改为过去式。
× Yes, I think riding a bike is kind of originally ways for people to go outside and you can see many people riding bikes on the road and our country have set many special ways for people to riding.
✓ Yes, I think riding a bike is one of the original ways for people to go out. You can see many people riding bikes on the road, and our country has set many special lanes for people to ride.
该复合句存在多处时态与语法问题: 1) “originally ways” 结构错误,应为名词短语“original ways”或更自然的“one of the original ways”。 2) “go outside” 在表达外出、更常用“go out”。 3) 原句后半句存在主谓不一致“our country have”,主语“our country”是单数,应使用单数动词“has”。 4) “ways for people to riding” 错误地在不定式结构中使用了动名词,应改为不定式“to ride”或名词“lanes for people to ride”。 5) 为保持时态一致,第一句用一般现在时描述普遍事实是可以的,但句子需重构以更自然流畅。建议改为两句,调整名词和动词形式,并使用复数名词“lanes”表示“专用道”。