Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm), correct grammar (use past simple), and organize details with a linking phrase. Limit to about 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. Instead, I had a small pink scooter that I rode with my brother, and occasionally I borrowed his bike when he wasn’t using it.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion, support it with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce hesitations. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: I wouldn’t say bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or motorcycles, and in my city scooters are especially common because they’re cheaper and easier to park.

× No, I did not like UMM have a bike when I was a kid, but I had my umm scooter, little pink scooter that I used to ride all the time with my brother who actually had a bike and, and I sometimes UMM borrowed the bike from my brother but I didn't own one.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a kid, but I had my little pink scooter that I used to ride all the time with my brother, who actually had a bike, and I sometimes borrowed his bike, but I didn't own one.

Grammar problem type ID:6 Present tense issue and ID:26 Sentence structure errors. The original mixes 'did not like have' which is ungrammatical; the correct past form is 'did not have' (use auxiliary did + base verb). Also redundant filler words and punctuation make the sentence run-on; break into clearer clauses and use possessive 'his' for the brother's bike. Suggestion: Use 'did not have' for negation in past simple, remove unnecessary hesitations, and add commas to separate clauses.

× I wouldn't say it is. People just try to get a car as soon as possible and they drive their cars or motorcycles all the time and it is more. Famous to use scooters than bikes in my city.

✓ I wouldn't say so. People try to get a car as soon as possible and they drive cars or ride motorcycles all the time, and in my city it is more common to use scooters than bikes.

Grammar problem type ID:27 Subject-verb agreement and ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and ID:17 Incorrect use of the definite article. 'I wouldn't say it is' is weak; 'I wouldn't say so' is idiomatic. 'Drive their cars or motorcycles' -> 'ride motorcycles' is correct collocation. 'It is more. Famous' splits sentence incorrectly; should be 'it is more common'. Also word order: 'in my city' belongs earlier or as clause 'in my city it is more common to use scooters than bikes'. Suggestion: Use idiomatic phrases, correct collocations (ride motorcycles), and combine fragments into a single clear sentence.