Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, when I was a child I didn't have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think every third child or even older person have a bike in my country, but most of people have a car.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Відповідь була короткою й зрозумілою, але її можна покращити, додавши коротке пояснення чи приклад, щоб продемонструвати більш природну розмовну англійську. Використайте одну тему-повідомлення на початку та 1–2 речення підтримки; уникайте повторів і скористайтеся зв’язниками (for example, because, so) для зв’язності.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I mostly walked to school because my parents preferred to drive me or I went with friends, so I never really needed one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Відповідь містить ідею, але є граматичні помилки й нечіткі формулювання. Щоб покращити оцінку, сформулюйте чітке вступне речення, використайте зв’язники (however, although, while) і конкретні деталі або приклад. Уникайте неточних виразів як "every third child or even older person" — краще дати приблизну оцінку або конкретний приклад.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are fairly common, especially among children and students. However, most families own a car for longer trips, so bicycles are used more for short rides and recreation rather than daily commuting.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yeah, I think every third child or even older person have a bike in my country, but most of people have a car.

✓ Yeah, I think every third child or even older person has a bike in my country, but most people have a car.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'every third child or even older person', so use 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'most of people' is incorrect; use 'most people'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement for singular subjects introduced by 'every' and omit 'of' after 'most' when followed directly by a noun.

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