Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word order (use past tense for childhood), use precise vocabulary (e.g. "white" instead of "white color"), and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was white and easy to ride, and I usually rode it at the weekends to the nearby park to play or meet my friends.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and then support it with clear reasons and a specific example. Reduce fillers ("uh", "because people") and use linking words (e.g. "because", "for example"). Use precise vocabulary ("commuting" instead of "to go to work") and variety in sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because many people use them for daily commuting; for example, students and factory workers often cycle to work or school since bicycles are inexpensive and convenient in crowded cities.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and it's a white color and very easy to ride and I usually ride my bike at weekend to go some parking or to meet my friends together.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was white and very easy to ride, and I usually rode my bike on weekends to go to a park or meet my friends.

Multiple tense errors and preposition/word choice issues. 'Have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Saying 'it's a white color' is awkward; use 'It was white'. 'Usually ride' should be past 'usually rode' to keep past narrative. 'At weekend' is incorrect preposition and singular; use 'on weekends'. 'To go some parking' is incorrect; use 'to go to a park'. Remove redundant 'together' after 'meet my friends'. Improve by keeping consistent past tense and using correct prepositions and word choices. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Oh, of course, uh, my bike, uh, the bikes are very popular in China, uh, because people, because people usually use the uh, to work, to go to work and uh, it's very cheap for us.

✓ Oh, of course. Bikes are very popular in China because people usually use them to go to work, and they are very cheap for us.

Subject-reference and pronoun errors and awkward repetition. 'My bike, the bikes are' is confusing; simply 'Bikes are very popular' is correct. 'People usually use the ... to work' lacks an object; use the pronoun 'them' to refer to bikes. 'It's very cheap for us' should be plural 'they are very cheap' to agree with 'bikes'. Remove repeated filler words and keep sentence concise. This fixes subject-pronoun agreement and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27