Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike. Uh it uh, it was given by my grandmother, but I didn't lied when I get and when I got because I can't, I couldn't lied.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, yes, many people use their bike to get their station and umm.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 答えは短く直接的ですが、時制や文法の誤り、繰り返しやため口のフィラー(uh, umm)が多く、流暢さと正確さが低下しています。具体的には過去の話なので過去形(had, was given, could not)を安定して使い、余計な言い換えを避け、1〜3文で簡潔に答える練習をしてください。また、遅れや躊躇を減らすため、重要な語句(given by my grandmother / I couldn't lie)を先に用意して話す癖をつけましょう。例文を何度か声に出して練習すると自然さが増します。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my grandmother, and I loved riding it to the park near our house.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答えは肯定的で要点を示していますが、語彙の正確さ('get their station'は不自然)と詳細の不足が目立ちます。まずは正しい表現(use bikes to go to work or to stations)を使い、理由や具体例(交通費の節約、近距離移動が便利、自転車専用道路の有無)を1〜2文で付け加えてください。接続語(because, for example, so)を使って論理的につなげると会話が自然になります。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work or to get to the nearest train station. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances to save time and money.
× Yes, I have a bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
The question asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so present tense 'have' is incorrect. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past situations, e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child.'
× Uh it uh, it was given by my grandmother, but I didn't lied when I get and when I got because I can't, I couldn't lied.
✓ It was given to me by my grandmother, but I didn't lie when I got it because I couldn't lie.
Multiple issues: 'was given by' is acceptable but 'given to me' is more natural. 'Didn’t lied' is wrong because after 'did' the base form 'lie' must be used (do-support rules for past simple). 'When I get' mixes present with past; use past 'when I got it.' 'I can't, I couldn't lied' mixes tenses and uses incorrect form; use past ability 'couldn't lie' with base verb. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistently for past narratives and use base verb after auxiliary 'did' or modal 'could.'
× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
This sentence is correct. No preposition error. (Included to show no change needed.)
× Yeah, yes, many people use their bike to get their station and umm.
✓ Yes, many people use their bikes to get to the station.
'Their bike' should be plural 'their bikes' to agree with plural 'many people' (singular/plural agreement). Also use 'to get to the station' — include preposition 'to' and singular 'the station' if referring to a specific public transport station. Suggestion: Match pronoun number to the noun (their + plural noun) and include appropriate prepositions: 'get to the station.'