Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
When I was a child I had a small back I usually used it to with my friends and rode it to the park.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I think bags are very popular in our countries. In our daily lives, you can see many kinds of bikes in our streets.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 发音和词汇错误需要纠正(例如 'back' 应为 'bike')。句子结构混乱,缺少标点与连贯性。回答也不够具体与有条理:应先用主题句直接回答,然后用一两句具体细节补充(何时、谁、去哪里、怎样的感受等),并使用连接词使句子更流畅。练习时注意时态一致和少于五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my friends to the local park. We would spend hours racing and practicing tricks, which made me feel free and happy.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 存在词汇错误(把 'bikes' 写成 'bags'),且第一句与第二句内容冲突,导致不自然。应先直接回答(Yes/No + reason),然后用一到两句具体例子或比较支持观点,使用连接词如 'because', 'for example' 来增强逻辑性。注意单复数和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, you can often see students and office workers cycling to school or work, and there are many bike lanes in big cities.
× When I was a child I had a small back I usually used it to with my friends and rode it to the park.
✓ When I was a child I had a small bike. I usually used it to ride with my friends and rode it to the park.
包含多处错误:1) 原句中“back”应为“bike”,是拼写错误,但拼写不在指定列表中,按词意改为“bike”。2) 原句缺少标点导致句子结构混乱,将句子拆为两句以清晰表达。3) “used it to with my friends” 中缺少动词“ride”,应为“used it to ride with my friends”。根据题目时态(描述过去)应使用一般过去时(had, used, rode)。建议:写作时注意单词拼写,使用适当标点分隔独立子句,并检查是否缺失必要动词。
× To be honest, I think bags are very popular in our countries. In our daily lives, you can see many kinds of bikes in our streets.
✓ To be honest, I think bikes are very popular in our country. In our daily lives, you can see many kinds of bikes in our streets.
原句使用了“bags”与上下文不符,应为“bikes”。此外原句为“our countries”暗示复数国家,但说话者通常指自己的国家,应使用单数“our country”。这些是单复数与词选择问题(属于单数和复数问题类别)。建议:注意名词单复数是否与语境一致,确认要表达的对象并使用正确形式。