Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bag when I was 8 years old and my brother told me how to ride a bike so I could ride a bike to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. Uh, but I think electronic bikes are more popular than bikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并注意细节准确性与逻辑连贯。首先开门见山回答问题(例如“Yes, I did.”),然后用一两句具体细节支持(什么时候有、是谁教的、用途、感受等)。避免词汇错误(如把“bike”写成“bag”)和冗长重复,句子不要超过五句,并使用连词(for example, so, because)保持条理。可以加一两个具体的例子或感受来丰富答案。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight, and my older brother taught me how to ride it. I used to cycle to school every day, which felt very freeing and gave me more independence.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更完整并提供具体原因或比较。先给出明确立场(Yes/No),然后用一两句说明原因或举例(比如公路条件、通勤习惯、价格或电动车的便利性)。使用连接词(however, because, for example)使回答更连贯,避免口头语“uh”。保持在五句以内。
Ví dụ: Not really. Traditional bicycles are less common now because many people prefer electric bikes for commuting; they are faster and require less effort, especially in busy cities. For example, I've seen many delivery riders and office workers using e-bikes to get around.
× Yes, I had a bag when I was 8 years old and my brother told me how to ride a bike so I could ride a bike to school.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 8 years old, and my brother taught me how to ride it so I could ride to school.
原句中有名词使用错误:学生回答问题是关于“bike(自行车)”,但句子里写成了“bag(包)”,应为“bike”。此外存在重复“ride a bike to school”和不自然的结构,改为“ride it so I could ride to school”更简练。建议:写作和口语时注意听题意,核对名词拼写;使用代词(it)避免重复;保持时态一致(过去时)。
× No, I don't think so. Uh, but I think electronic bikes are more popular than bikes.
✓ No, I don't think so. Uh, but I think electric bikes are more popular than regular bikes.
原句用词不准确:通常应使用“electric bikes”(电动自行车)而不是“electronic bikes”。此外“more popular than bikes”逻辑上比较对象不明确,改为“more popular than regular bikes”更清晰。时态和语法本身为一般现在时,符合习惯用法。建议:注意固定搭配词汇(electric vs electronic),比较时明确比较对象。