Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and filler words, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Aim for 2–4 sentences, avoid repetition, and use varied vocabulary (e.g., "ride", "exercise", "spare time").

Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. Riding helped me get regular exercise and was a favourite way to spend my spare time.

Gợi ý: Correct obvious mistakes, speak clearly and state your main idea first. Use linking words to add reasons or examples, and provide at least one specific detail about where or why bikes are popular (e.g., cities, students, short trips). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns. They are a convenient and cheap way to travel short distances, and many people use them to commute to work or run errands.

× To tell the truth, I'm not so sure, but umm, I think yes, I had a bike and uh actually, uh, it was really fun to have a bike uh, it helped me to uh, do sport and enjoy my free time.

✓ To tell the truth, I'm not so sure, but I think I did; I had a bike, and actually it was really fun to have one. It helped me do sports and enjoy my free time.

The original mixes present and past incorrectly and omits plural form for 'sports'. 'I think yes, I had a bike' is informal and inconsistent; use 'I think I did; I had a bike' or 'I think so; I had a bike' to match past-tense question. 'Do sport' is non-idiomatic in this context — use 'do sports' or 'play sports'. Remove filler words and repeated fillers for clarity. Use 'one' to avoid repetition of 'bike'.

× Yes, I believe bags are really popular in my country, especially in uh, subworms umm. Moreover, bikes are convenient is Bikes are convenient, mean of transport and, uh, it's.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are really popular in my country, especially in suburbs. Moreover, bikes are a convenient means of transport, and they are affordable.

The original wrongly uses 'bags' instead of 'bikes' and a non-word 'subworms' likely intended as 'suburbs'; this is a lexical/pronoun/word-choice error affecting meaning. 'Bikes are convenient is Bikes are convenient' is a fragmented repetition. Use plural subject 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' and 'a convenient means of transport' for correct expression. Add a clear subject 'they' for the final clause or rephrase to avoid sentence fragments. 'Means' is singular in form but treated as a countable noun here requiring the article 'a'.